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Natchez Trace #1

The Promise of Breeze Hill

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Natchez, MS; 1791

Anxious for his brothers to join him on the rugged frontier along the Mississippi River, Connor O'Shea has no choice but to indenture himself as a carpenter in exchange for their passage from Ireland. But when he's sold to Isabella Bartholomew of Breeze Hill Plantation, Connor fears he'll repeat past mistakes and vows not to be tempted by the lovely lady.

The responsibilities of running Breeze Hill have fallen on Isabella's shoulders after her brother was found dead in the swamps along the Natchez Trace and a suspicious fire devastated their crops, almost destroyed their home, and left her father seriously injured. Even with Connor's help, Isabella fears she'll lose her family's plantation. Despite her growing feelings for the handsome Irish carpenter, she seriously considers accepting her wealthy and influential neighbor's proposal of marriage.

Soon, though, Connor realizes someone is out to eliminate the Bartholomew family. Can he set aside his own feelings to keep Isabella safe?

416 pages, Paperback

First published August 1, 2017

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Pam Hillman

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CBA Bestselling author PAM HILLMAN was born and raised on a dairy farm in Mississippi and spent her teenage years perched on the seat of a tractor raking hay. In those days, her daddy couldn't afford two cab tractors with air conditioning and a radio, so Pam drove an Allis Chalmers 110. Even when her daddy asked her if she wanted to bale hay, she told him she didn't mind raking. Raking hay doesn't take much thought so Pam spent her time working on her tan and making up stories in her head. Now, that's the kind of life every girl should dream of. www.pamhillman.com


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2,562 reviews1,389 followers
January 16, 2018
At first this was shaping up to be very close to a five-star read. The prose is lyrical and the characters and circumstances very engaging. I was a bit shocked to see a French profanity in a scene, but I was still really enjoying it.

A little past the halfway point, it seemed to lose focus. Strong Isabella falls prey to worry and misunderstandings and begins to believe that the bad guy might actually hold the solution. It was still a very interesting story, but it wasn’t as compelling, and I felt that it began to lose a bit of its uniqueness as a story in a little-featured time period and place. Then I encountered two more profanities, this time in English, at 73% and 74%. Seriously, I’m so fed up with Christian authors who write characters who take God’s name in vain. Fed up with “mainstream” Christian publishers who think it’s okay to leave it in.

Well, so Isabella finds herself at the end of the rope, and she takes matters into her own hand. Rather than seeking wise counsel from the people around her, rather than praying and seeking God for an answer, she does what she thinks is “wise,” thereby endangering herself and several other people. The odds are not good. Ultimately the rescue felt like mere chance, a convenient way to complete two or three plot points within a given amount of time.

The ending was satisfying and the writing style itself stayed engaging and well-crafted throughout the story.

Thanks to NetGalley for a free review copy.
Profile Image for Beth.
786 reviews336 followers
January 17, 2018
Quick review!

The Promise of Breeze Hill is the first book I've read by Pam Hillman, but I will definitely be reading more at some point. This story is historical, but focuses heavily on the romantic aspect. That's not necessarily a bad thing, but for me, it was a lighter, fluffier read than what I typically prefer. The time period and the setting are two that are interesting to me. I've been to Natchez once before, and while I'm sure things are drastically different now, it's still a place that has a lot of historical sites.

The plot is engaging and definitely carried the story for me. I also liked the relationships between all of the characters at Breeze Hill. Of the two main characters, I actually preferred Connor over Isabella, simply because I found his character to be more consistent. I appreciated Isabella's assertive and strong-willed nature, but there were times that I thought she acted counter to what I felt her character would do in certain situations. Except for a silly miscommunication and some back-and-forth emotions, the romance progresses realistically and is endearing overall.

Overall, for me, The Promise of Breeze Hill was a light and fun historical, and I'm looking forward to reading the next book in the series.
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1,592 reviews542 followers
August 23, 2017
I seriously loved the history and setting of this story! It's a time and place I know little about, so I was fascinated by the details of life there, the dangers and struggles, the successes and progress. The vibrant characters made it come alive and it was great to see Isabella and Connor's relationship shift throughout the book. The author chose to let us know who the villain is from the beginning so even though it wasn't a mystery who was causing the destruction, there was still heightened tension and I couldn't help but want to warn Isabella! It was admirable to see how Connor helped Isabella's father recuperate in body and mind, and his strength was able to continue as the foundation of Breeze Hill. The sweet romance is woven throughout various hardships and challenges, and I loved every minute of reading this book. Highly recommend to fans of Laura Frantz and Tamera Alexander!

(I received a complimentary copy of the book; all opinions in this review are my own)
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2,005 reviews140 followers
March 29, 2018
"If you're unwilling or unable to fulfill the terms of your indenture, now is the time to say so."

Master carpenter Connor O'Shea has been placed under a binding contract; work until he can earn enough money to secure passage to American for his four younger brothers. Never did he expect to have his papers re-purchased by a beautiful plantation owner's daughter. "God help him", was the prayer that escaped his lips when Miss Isabella Bartholomew of Breeze Hill Plantation stepped forward at the auction.

Isabella Bartholomew is desperate to rescue her family property from ruin and the Irish carpenter seems just the man to help them rebuild what a fire destroyed. Breeze Hill Plantation borders a dangerous trade route to Natchez and highwayman have already murdered her brother and set fire to their property; maiming her father, destroying valuable crops and a wing of their stately home. When the handsome Irishman proves his loyalty and courage immediately upon the journey back to Breeze Hill, Isabella wonders just what kind of arrangement she has actually agreed upon.

While the first portion of this story kept a steady, somewhat predictable pace, it is the second half that will grab the reader's attention and prove the story to be anything but ordinary, for there are dangerous undercurrents hovering just below the surface of the Natchez Trace.

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Author 6 books806 followers
June 23, 2018
First of all, I love this cover so much!
I really liked most of this book, but the last half of the book was sort of confusing and then the main characters were making strange decisions and judgments and fighting against having the happy ending they both wanted for what seemed to be very petty reasons. The chemistry between the hero and heroine was very good for most of the book... until they were insisting that they hated each other near the end. And then boom, suddenly they admitted they didn’t. I wasn’t very impressed with how the ending wrapped up. But I’ll probaby read the next book in the series. It was basically well written, but the plot and scenarios could have been better.
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1,931 reviews587 followers
January 8, 2018
Solid historical romance novel. The Promise of Breeze Hill is primarily about Connor O'Shea, an immigrant from Ireland and Isabella Bartholomew, the daughter of an injured plantation owner. Connor's focus is earning passage for his four younger brothers from Ireland to America while Isabella is trying to keep her family plantation afloat after the loss of her brother.

The story isn't heavy on historical detail but provides enough to put the reader in the correct setting. Readers will definitely see there was quite a bit of lawlessness. I especially enjoyed the reference to Job and how that paralleled to Isabel's circumstances.

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Author 3 books1,690 followers
January 16, 2018
There are spoilers in my review.

This is a hard review for me to write. I never like to point out things I didn't like in a book. It's even tougher when I was looking forward to the book for a while because the premise sounded so great and the cover was beautiful. I was really disappointed in this book. I had rather hoped it would be a keeper and a new author to enjoy for me. Sadly, it was a complete miss for me, the first chapter excepted.

This book annoyed me more than anything. From several French and English profanities to many compromising situations for the leading lady, there were just too many things that drove me bonkers for me to enjoy this story, even though that first chapter hooked me in immediately. It was especially difficult to follow the leap from one crazy scenario to another when there was hardly any logical connection between them. Because of the leading lady constantly being thrust into compromising situations, all involving the leading man as well (which I found strange as he kept flip-flopping between wanting to keep to their stations and kissing her senseless), I ended up not caring about either character or what happened to them in the end. Neither of them were consistent, actually, as she declared her love for him, then recanted it, then expected him to fight for her if he loved her. Why would he do that if she just took back her declaration of love? The logic in this book was too hard to follow, leaving me confused and wishing the book was shorter so I'd already be done with it.

Also, there was a bit of inconsistency with the path to town from the plantation. At one point early on there were deep ditches on either side, but at a key moment later in the plot, there were walls of rock up either side of the trace simply so the passersby would be trapped. Is it possible to change the setting based on the needs of the scenes? This was odd and disorienting to me. There were some improbable situations (ones that should have easily killed the people involved but didn't even leave them with a scratch) that broke my concentration.

All the times God's name was taken in vain (at least twice in French and at least three times in English) and the two or three times that "heaven" and "all that's holy" were sworn by made the prayers in the story null and void to me, since not once did anyone seek forgiveness for abusing His name. One cannot have it both ways, respecting and blaspheming God.

While I probably won't try another book by this author, I have several friends who have enjoyed this book, so perhaps others will enjoy this and other works of Ms. Hillman's.

I won this book from Goodreads, but a review (positive or negative) was not required.
3,281 reviews1,735 followers
September 24, 2018
Gobsmacked doesn't even begin to describe the way I'm feeling right now as I sit in a discombobulated 'the-morning-after-a-frenzied-reading-night' stupor. I only have two words.

Connor O'Shea.

Give me a moment to rally my sensibilities, but you might have to move my dog-eared copy of Breeze Hill to another room so I'm not tempted to...rats...just a sec while I read a particularly toe-curling moment over again.

Blissful sigh. Okay, I'm back. Goodness, that Connor!(insert fangirl swooning emoji here.) Hero of my heart. Masterful, compassionate, noble in spirit. A man with a work ethic and passion for family. And protective. Oh, someone pass me the smelling salts, the opportunities he has to go all protective on Miss Isabella Bartholomew...rats, wait a sec, I need to re-read a particularly swoonworthy rescue.

Okay, I'm back..for now. I can't seem to stop myself from reading the tantalizing bits over again...which is pretty much the whole book so you see my dilemma. And did I mention Connor is Irish (in case you didn't clue in by his name) but I mean, almost fresh off the boat Irish so he still has the brogue. Set my heart afluttering every time he spoke -- even when he was being an 'eejit.'

Isabella is a tad impetuous and stubborn and used to running things so there's bound to be some clashing when Connor starts taking initiative -- and sometimes issuing commands that don't go over very well. I do so love an independent-thinking heroine. She's changed a lot in a year of hardship -- grown and stretched in every way except in her faith. There's a lovely inspirational thread that follows Isabella's battles with God and her ultimate surrender to His higher power.

And a really intriguing aspect of this story is the way the element of suspense is handled. Only the reader knows right from the start who the villain is. The characters haven't a clue. So I was always on edge every time The Villain showed up and I'd try to warn Isabella with a "Bad guy alert!" But did she listen to me? Of course not! She's all sweet and nice and "Oh, do come in and visit awhile. Martha, bring us some tea, if you please." And there I am expiring on my fainting couch for all the wrong reasons because she's just led Danger into their midst. (cue the scary organ music)

Though it might not seem like it from this very Connor-centric review, there is an astounding cast of secondary characters -- both good and pure evil -- that bring an even deeper dimension to an already amazing story. And the history is fascinating. I don't know a whole lot about this era and particularly this part of America so the setting added even more to my reading pleasure.

And when the story came to an end as all good books inevitably do, I was left bereft because Connor chose Isabella not me (shuddering sigh)...but...wait, he has brothers and the next book is about....yoohoo, Quinn, we haven't met yet but I'm about to fall deeply in love with you...(I'm so fickle!)
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2,967 reviews482 followers
June 14, 2017
I loved this book what a great look at the late 1700’s in the now known state of Mississippi, which was under Spanish control at that point, and a lot of lawlessness.
Connor O’Shea is a desperate man; he needs to be reunited with his brothers that are still in Ireland, so he puts himself in indenture to help. He is a master carpenter, and that is exactly what Isabella Bartholomew needs, she has lost so much and needs his help desperately, and thus the connection is made.
The author has woven such a tale that I found myself in the shoes of these people, and although early on we know whom the culprit is, we are cringing every time he shows up. You begin to doubt some of the others, and wonder where their heart lies, and if everything here is going to go up in smoke.
If you enjoy historical novels, this is a must read, and in the end you will be left with a lingering wish that the last page hadn’t been turned, and we could go back for more.
Loved how this book circled around and was almost a repeat of long back family history, only not Connors, no wonder her father was so compassionate.
I received this book through Ededweiss and Tyndale House Publishers, and was not required to give a positive review.
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781 reviews81 followers
October 23, 2017
My Thoughts:
I honestly don't know why it took me so long to start this book. But it did. I was captivated by the first few pages. And while it took me about 2 weeks to actually read the book, I'm so glad that I finally got around to it.

I loved Connor. I loved how he was determined to keep Isabella safe at all costs. I loved how she was just as determined to not let him. I also enjoyed learning more about the history of Natchez as most of my knowledge of that town comes from the form of the musical Showboat.

I'm looking forward to seeing these characters again in the next one of the series, about Connor's brother Quinn.

I received a Kindle copy via NetGalley from the publisher. My thoughts and opinions are my own.

Recommended to fans of historical fiction, Julie Lessman, Pam Hillman, Jody Hedlund, Laura Frantz

Rating - 4 stars
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Author 13 books137 followers
June 14, 2018
4.5 stars
Finally!! Haha, after waiting a week for a complete copy to come in the mail, I was at last able to read the last 14 pages!
Such a sweeping and delightful read, set in an era and place that aren't too common (at least in my own reading experience). I really enjoyed learning a bit about the Trace. I loved the two principal characters. There was a lot of focus on the physical attraction, but they were both such great characters it kind of went unsaid that their interest saw beyond the face. I can't wait to read The Road to Magnolia Glen!
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Author 25 books530 followers
July 7, 2018
I read book two before I read book one, and it did slightly spoil some of the things in this book (so definitely read these in order!). At the same time, I was still able to enjoy the book. Both Connor and Isabella were very likable characters.

As for plot and writing style, I did really like this book. I’ll expound more later, but the plot wasn’t much apart from the romance. There was non-romance plot, but in my opinion, it could have definitely been strengthened and made a lot more intense (of course, I do admit that I’m just not 100% a romance fan).

In book two, there was more of a plot apart from the romance. Here, the main theme of the book seemed to be their romance, and that’s just not my personal taste. There were a lot of kisses (more detailed), longings, and a couple of suggestive situations that make me recommend this for 18+.

The spiritual content was there, but it was just in a couple of scenes. While Connor seemed to come on the scene as a strong Christian, that kind of faded as the story progressed, which disappointed me.

In conclusion, I think die-hard romance fans will adore this book. Less romantic readers, like me, get a little bit of a romance overdose in it.
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155 reviews
January 29, 2018
I enjoyed this book immensely. Historical novels aren't my favorite genre, but this kept me so interested and I was fascinated about this time in history. There were somethings I was not aware of or didn't think about. Such as being an indentured servant and the lawlessness of that time. I loved all of the characters in the book and thought they were well written. Pam Hillman is a new author to me and I thoroughly enjoyed her writing and I am looking forward to the next book in the series!
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Author 1 book23 followers
September 27, 2017
Characters
Connor: A gentle, protective, swoon-worthy hero. Irish. Isabella: A gutsy heroine determined to save her struggling plantation home. 

They both dearly love their families and put their heart and soul into pursuing their goals.

Secondary characters in this novel are memorable as well! Many unique and vivid portraits of Southern folk. This heroine has a mystery tied to her mother, which was intriguing. And I found it interesting to watch her grow from an impetuous young girl into her role of perceptive woman-of-the-house. 

Setting
Fascinating history. Life and times of Mississippians at the end of the 18th century. This was before statehood, so when the men gathered on the porch to drink lemonade, they spoke of the territory and governor and banded together as property owners to deal with the issues facing them and their loved ones. I also found interesting the mentions of Irish slaves and their role during this time period. 

Romance
From the moment Connor and Isabella meet at the auction block, he is so wounded and guilt-ridden and defensive, but matures through his love for the heroine and his realization that his perceptions from his past life are wrong. Connor has had a previous, hurtful relationship, but Isabella is quite innocent about men. About many things, as she has been sheltered and well-guarded in her plantation home and social circles. Though Connor has been ill-treated by a woman, gives care to be respectful and gentle with Isabella, no matter how little he trusts her. As their feelings grow, their relationship develops tenderly, showcasing Connor's protective instincts. 

Pace  

Well-paced, flowing, and varied. Thoughtful at times and action packed at others. Goes perfectly with lemonade and porch swings!

 

Stakes
The danger of highwaymen along the Natchez Trace and specifically the Devil’s Backbone were historical bits I’d never heard of until reading Pam’s blogs about her research for this book. An eye-opening subject since sometimes we, at least I, tend to think of the Natchez Trace as a peaceful, scenic joyride. Not so during the 18th century. I'm glad for books like these that bring out the struggles of those in prior centuries, familiar struggles that I can relate to and learn from.

Overall Impression
The history fascinates, characters made me care about them, and I can’t wait to see what happens to the other Connor brothers! 
1,777 reviews
September 10, 2017
When I found out that author Pam Hillman’s newest offering had an Irish hero, I said, “Yes please!” I really enjoyed this novel of life that takes place in 1791 Mississippi. This was a time in which slavery was still in progress and very dangerous highwaymen roamed and terrorized the people. We have a story of a family who has had some very bad things happen to them. And as we read we see that some of these things may have been done purposely. When Isabella goes to purchase the indenture of Connor O’Shea she does not realize that she purchased the indenture of a real hero.

I really liked the family closeness of both the main characters. Isabella is trying to run the plantation and the home while taking care of her father and very pregnant sister-in-law. Connor just wants to make enough money to send for his brothers that are still in a poverty stricken state in Ireland. There was also the unity of the community that without I wonder how any of them could have survived.

There were some really interesting historical aspects to this story. One was that Connor had lived in the old world of Europe with its stages of classes and prejudice, however as he finds out America was quite different. It was interesting to learn that while a lot of slaves came from Africa, there were other countries that had their citizens sold as slaves as well. Ireland was one that was forced to add to the human trafficking conditions of the day.

This story really got to me and I enjoyed reading every minute of it. It is one that will stick with me for a long time to come. The romance was delightful, the danger was real even though we were unaware of the source, and the history was deep and rich.

I was provided with a copy of this book for free. I was not required to post a positive review and all views and opinions expressed are my own.

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Author 4 books16 followers
June 20, 2017
It was interesting to learn a bit more about the South at a time we hardly ever study--after the American Revolution, when it left British hands and became controlled by Spain (but before Napoleon took control and sold it to America). Even then there were contentions over slavery, and it was particularly interesting to learn about the white slavery that the British had perpetrated. Highwaymen and disreputable folk abounded in the relatively recently-settled territory, leaving room for adventure.

I had a hard time caring for Connor as much as I felt like I should, especially at first--he's neither particularly nice nor respectful to Isabella, thanks to previous bad experiences with a woman, and he gives a lot of mixed signals. To be fair, his actions are generally kind and considerate, but his attitude grated on me. I did like Isabella, and kind of wanted to see her put Connor in his place. Occasionally she does something extremely foolish, but at least it's with good intentions. I really liked Isabella's family and servants--who seemed like family anyway, especially the kids. The estate feels like a real tight-knit community, and I really enjoyed how the author brought out that feeling of closeness.

Thank you Tyndale House and NetGalley for providing a free e-book; I was not required to write a positive review, and all opinions are my own.
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1,269 reviews149 followers
November 14, 2017
Loved This Book

I have found a new to me author and I am in reader heaven. I love romance and I love history. The author blended the two beautifully. Being from the south I enjoyed learning about Natchez and plantations along the Trace. This book had suspense in it as well. I kept turning the pages to find out how it all would end up. I loved the hero. Let's talk awesome kissing scenes. Wow!! I totally swooned. This is what I love in books. Sweet romances and swoony heroes. I can't wait to read more from this amazing and talented author.
553 reviews
August 16, 2017
I have to say the first meet with Connor O’ Shea up on the auction block; I knew my heart was in trouble! As soon as I heard his Irish lilt, I was in deep waters and didn’t care if I drowned. His sparkling green eyes and crooked smile added to his charm, the more I got to know his character in the story, the more I knew he was a man of integrity, gentle faith, and a rare steadfastness. A man one could count on in a pinch, reliable as the snow in winter and a great protector of those he feels responsible for. He has a great capacity to love as seen in his need to secure passage for his younger brothers. A hero worthy of his weight in gold.

Of course, any good hero needs a heroine by his side! I think he more than met his match in Isabella Bartholomew. A lady of distinguishable character who’s been through the fire, literally after her plantation & cotton crops caught fire all but destroying her home, a lucrative future and the father she loves. Having been thrust into a position no lady of her era should be in, she rises above the challenge by indenturing O’ Shea to rebuild Breeze Hill in exchange for his brother’s safe passage to the Americas. These two certainly shoot sparks and brandish words as if sword fighting! Snappish dialogue aside, there’s an ever-growing attraction just under the surface which adds to the tension.

No story would be complete without some nefarious characters to add extra layers to an already tense plot. It certainly had me turning pages faster just to see what happens next and how both Conner and Mistress Bartholomew can eliminate the danger surrounding the estate. Lastly, I never heard of the Natchez Trace and the author certainly gives a complete picture in history. A dangerous passage wrought with highwaymen with no regard to life and the greed of money making many a wary traveler.

I found this to be a historically rich, many layered, and engaging novel with the kind of character depth I so love. I would easily put this as one of my top reads of 2017, finishing it in a mere 24 hours!

*I received a complimentary copy. No favorable review was required and opinions expressed here are my own. *
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1,521 reviews94 followers
August 8, 2017
My heart was held captive by this Gone with the Wind feel of a story. I quickly bonded with the characters as I imagined Isabella Bartholomew to be a little like Scarlett. She had to grow up fast after her father’s injuries had him physically unable to do much. She soon becomes the heart of Breeze Hill and is responsible for its day to day functions. Behind Isabella’s sweet southern bell exterior, readers could see her fierce love for the Plantation and her keen sense of responsibility as she is willing to sacrifice her own happiness to save her home and protect her family.

The author helps readers get under the skin of the characters and feel their pain, joy and struggle in hard hopeless times. I enjoyed the splash of romance which is not the main focus of the story. I enjoyed the special moments that left me teary eyed and cheering!

Readers meet Connor who had apprenticed under John W. Benson, renowned master craftsman from the Carolinas. He died and left him up for grabs. He needed a benefactor in order get his brothers to America.

“Sold,” Bloomfield’s gavel beat a death knell against the table in front of him. “To Miss Isabella Bartholomew on behalf of Breeze Hill Plantation.”

“Cold dread swooshed up from Conner’s stomach and exploded in his chest.”
“A woman. He’d been indentured to a woman….God help him.”

I felt for this man as he found himself in a precarious place after the death of his benefactor. Connor would not be done in by another pretty face. He had been masterfully manipulated by his previous plantation owners’ daughter in Ireland. It’s the very thing that had him on the run to America in the first place.

Connor, Isabelle, and her father became increasingly concerned about the danger lurking in the shadows. How would she fight them? They start to prepare. I enjoyed how Isabell, her father, and Connor grow and change as the story progressed. Connor soon discovers he has the same values as Isabelle. He too would do whatever it took to have his family united again

She ignores her feelings for Connor to entertain several marriage proposals being presented. She had to think about her family. These were offers from wealthy and influential neighbors interested in her for her property. Could these very men be the ones out to steal Breeze Hill from them? Sabotage their livelihood? The author has a part where she writes in the POV of the villain which made him creepier. I liked that the author had a few surprises involving the villain I didn’t see coming.

I loved this page-turning story with lots of action, suspense and just plain fun that included a horse race while ladies shopping about town. Sit back and enjoy this novel that will stay with you long after you close the book. This would make a great book club pick there is so much to discuss and the author includes 12 discussion questions. This is the first novel I’ve read by this author it won’t be the last.

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Author 29 books1,061 followers
February 6, 2018
I loved it and will be back later with a review! And now I'm back.

Conner's Irish brogue drew me in with the first sentence! He is a swoon-worthy hero--strong, honorable and his own man. Something he needed when he indentured himself to Miss Isabella Bartholomew of Breeze Hill Plantation so that he could bring his brothers over from Ireland. She is headstrong and he is stubborn, but when the outside forces from a den of thieves on the Natchez Trace threatened Breeze Hill, their differences were put aside and they worked together against the evil forces. 

The Promise of Breeze Hill offers a nice mystery, a family you will care about, plenty of villains--and you're not certain just who's who, and a look at Mississippi history in the late 1700s. 

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683 reviews39 followers
September 6, 2017
The cover for this book is beautiful, and was the main reason for my choice here. The author is new to me, and I am generally not that interested in this time period and location. I've never heard of Natchez or the Trace, or familiar with the issues of the day. The benefit of reading books like this, especially with the historical fiction, is exactly that. A greater understanding of the history of an area.

Connor O'Shea has been working under a well known and respected carpenter/craftsman and is now indentured to a Plantation along the Natchez Trace, MS. He was sent off to America after what he considers the biggest mistake of his life - falling for a woman far above his station. A landowners daughter in Ireland. Leaving behind his brothers he is determined to earn enough for passage to bring them to him in America. He has no idea however the dire straits that Breeze Hill is in, nor is he aware of the danger the Bartholomew family is in. They have suffered death and destruction and Isabella's father is highly suspicious that there is powers at play to bring about the downfall of his Plantation. He has lost a son, and half the home to a fire, in which he himself was also badly wounded. Connor is brought to Breeze Hill in efforts to rebuild the home, and assist what is left of his workers in getting the Plantation back on track.

Isabella is desperate to prove her value, and just wants to do right by everyone. In that she makes quick decisions that place her in harms way on many an occasion, giving our hero Connor many an opportunity to step in and rescue. With many landowner suitors clamoring for her attention, Isabella has a alternative focus than what she had only mere months earlier. The sudden tragic death of her brother (and heir to the plantation) has put her on a path of trying to protect those left, including her sister in law who is pregnant with a potential new heir. There is evil at play and it seems no-one is safe along the Trace.

There's times when I felt like the story lagged a little, waiting periods while we reflect on Isabella's thoughts. Connor reminds us often of the pitfalls of falling in love above your station. The author does a fine job of incorporating many elements into the plot. Highwaymen, Slave owners/traders, Upper Class, the Spanish Governor & the French baddie. Overall I give this book 3.5 stars.

Thank you to Netgalley & Tyndale for the complimentary eARC. This is my honest review.



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571 reviews236 followers
August 1, 2017
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Natchez, MS; 1791
Anxious for his brothers to join him on the rugged frontier along the Mississippi River, Connor O'Shea has no choice but to indenture himself as a carpenter in exchange for their passage from Ireland. But when he's sold to Isabella Bartholomew of Breeze Hill Plantation, Connor fears he'll repeat past mistakes and vows not to be tempted by the lovely lady.

The responsibilities of running Breeze Hill have fallen on Isabella's shoulders after her brother was found dead in the swamps along the Natchez Trace and a suspicious fire devastated their crops, almost destroyed their home, and left her father seriously injured. Even with Connor's help, Isabella fears she'll lose her family's plantation. Despite her growing feelings for the handsome Irish carpenter, she seriously considers accepting her wealthy and influential neighbor's proposal of marriage.

Soon, though, Connor realizes someone is out to eliminate the Bartholomew family. Can he set aside his own feelings to keep Isabella safe?





My Review


I absolutely LOVED The Promise of Breeze Hill. Set in what is now known as Mississippi which at this time was controlled by the Spanish and filled with utter chaos and lawlessness. Isabella is left to run her family's plantation after her father is injured and her brother is suspiciously found dead along the Natchez Trace. And she fears they may lose everything they have. Enter Connor who is an Irish carpenter has been sold to Isabella's family. As Isabella and Connor begin falling for on another Isabella does consider accepting her wealthy neighbor's proposal just to save her family's livlihood. Isabella and Connor must also figure out who has it out for Isabella's family. The Promise of Breeze Hill is not just another historical novel, but a romance and mystery wrapped up into a satisfying adventure.
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December 13, 2017
Following the death of her brother and her father’s subsequent injuries, Isabella Bartholemew is left in control of her family plantation of Breeze Hill on the Natchez Trace. She needs labour. Her father is opposed to slavery. So she hires an indentured Irish carpenter to rebuild the estate—Connor O’Shea.

I liked Isabella. She was a strong woman who was prepared to do what needed to be done to protect her family and her home. And there were a lot of threats. Natchez in 1791 wasn’t a safe place for a woman almost alone. It was surrounded by slave traders, rouges on the road, and several suitors … some of whom are not what they appear.

That’s a lot of trouble to navigate, and Isabella does it well. She was more intelligent and more savvy than many historical romance heroines. I liked that.

I enjoyed watching Isabella and Connor get to know each other, and watching their relationship progress against the backdrop of the local troubles. Connor O’Shea is practically perfect. He is a handsome, hardworking man of faith and principles, who once made the mistake of falling for the wrong girl. He says he’s determined not to do the same again, but his actions (and feelings) don’t match his words or will. This makes for some fun in the romance. (Although there was also plenty of conflict.)

All in all, The Promise of Breeze Hill was an excellent historical romance. The ending was perhaps a little too neat, but that’s a small niggle in an enjoyable novel.
Thanks to NetGalley and Tyndale House for providing a free ebook for review.
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December 9, 2017
I saved so many great books for my birthday reading vacation and it seems so wonderful to have so many good books to read.
This was set in a time period that I don't always read too much about, and with some mystery intertwined as well as an Irish indentured servant, there was so much going for it.
Plus, Pam Hillman is a talented story teller and I have enjoyed her other books, so I knew I would love this one! I was not wrong. If you like historical fiction, pick this one up.
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January 4, 2018
Connor is a man determined to not repeat the past. Isabella is a woman fighting for her family's future. Both face danger, hardships and the truth that God is with us even when things go wrong.
I enjoyed the pace in this book, the author wove action and drama together well without letting the plot drag at all. I stayed up late to finnish this one! I will be looking for more from this author.
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October 15, 2017
4.5 Stars

Reviewed by Eva

Sexual Content: Subtle

Language Content: Mild

Violent Content: Minimal

Isabella Bartholomew is struggling to maintain her plantation in pre-Civil War Natchez. With her brother dead and her father seriously injured and a recent fire that destroyed her crops, Isabella needs all the help she can get. And help comes in the form of an Irish man called Connor O’Shea, who is desperate for money to bring his brothers over from Ireland to the American frontier. He indentures himself to work for Isabella and gain the money to bring his brothers over as quickly as possible. He also has learned some lessons from the past, one of which includes not to fall for every pretty woman and Isabella certainly is pretty. Connor works as a carpenter for Isabella on Breeze
Hill Plantation. Even though it becomes clear early on that the attraction between Connor and Isabella is mutual, the storyline is of course more complex, with another suitor of Isabella’s in the picture who is not quite as sympathetic as Connor. Still, her neighbor is rich and Isabella could certainly use the money, so no quick resolution to that courtship takes place and we as readers to experience the complex courtship rituals of the pre-war South during the rough, but still cultured frontier days.

Connor has his doubts early about this neighbor, too many things have gone wrong for Isabella and so she is now low hanging fruit for a suitor like the neighbor. Maybe these developments are just too much of a coincidence to not have been planned? The reader of historic novels will enjoy this book, in part due to the more unusual time period, but also because the characters are well developed and the storyline, despite a lot of meandering is believable and interesting.

-- EVA
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August 17, 2017
I'm not sure which character I liked reading about more, Isabella or Connor. And then putting the two of them together?! It was beyond entertaining. Between Connor's wit and sarcasm, and Isabella's determination and grit, it seemed destined these two would get under each other's skin. In a charming way of course! Their growing attraction for one another was not lost on me, no matter how much they tried to deny it. The banter between these two characters was my favorite part of the book, and lasted right up until the end.

The author did a wonderful job in mixing suspense, romance, family, and survival in this story. The story flowed beautifully, and my eyes were not going anywhere until I saw the words "the end". Perhaps what captured my attention the most was the prayers the characters were quick to say. They didn't have to be long and drawn out, just enough to grab my attention. I like seeing faith in my leading characters without being too preachy. I want it to be natural, and this was very natural.

Bottom line - this is a great story. The setting is beautiful, the characters are strong, and while there are some heavy topics written, there are some comical and light hearted scenes interwoven that allow you to regroup and carry on. Highly recommend you give this a try. I received a complimentary copy of this book. I was not required to write a favorable review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.
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August 11, 2017
Good read. I really wanted to read this one and was so happy I got the opportunity to. Pam comes up with some of the best plots, and I've always enjoyed her writing. The only thing that made this a good read instead of a GREAT read was simply because of some of the jumpiness of scenes and also a little too much kissing for me! LOL! Now don't get me wrong I don't mind kissing scenes, and when they're done well I enjoy them! But I just felt there were too many and some were at strange times, in my personal opinion. LOL! I don't want to give anything away so I'll just say I wish some of the kisses were placed differently in the story or cut out all together. The characters are great though, and I can't wait to read about Connor's other brothers! Connor himself is a great character, though a bit on the stubborn side, though any Irish character worth his salt should be! ;) And I both loved and got frustrated with Isabella. Strong and capable one moment and a tad timid the next, there were scenes in this book that blew me away and I want to read them again and again! I LOVE when Isabella was strong! Then end felt a tad rushed to me, though I enjoyed how Pam brought everything together! Overall it was a nice read and I'm enjoyed many aspects of Isabella and Connor's journey.

Songs: "He Leadeth Me" performed by The Cluster Pluckers, "Come To Jesus" by Chris Rice
Songs etc. May be changed and/or added in the future. ~ASC

Jeremiah 29:11

~ASC

*I requested and received this book from Tyndale for the purpose of reviewing it. This in no way affected my opinion and the above are my true thoughts and feelings about The Promise of Breeze Hill. ~ASC
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